Monday, August 23, 2010

candy land of story land

there was a little girl in candy land. she lost her cottage. her mommy and daddy were at her house. she was a little kid, but she was like a mouse. she lost her wings from her fairy godmother. she didn't know how to fly. she lost her mumma that she loved so much. she so loved her cottage that smelled like candy, that's why she went there.

then she saw another candy land that she could go in, so she go-ed in one of the houses of candy. she went there, and she snuck in the house where the people were. and a daddy (not HER daddy, just A daddy) said "there's another candy land right there". they went to the other candy land. the people were there. and they said "can we live here?" and they said "no."

i can put this in the story: there was a mouse that was near her that was brave that can save her.

the end.

(bellanotes: just keep reading it till i like it mumma)

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